BP9

Referring to the peer review process for student websites, please state three changes you would recommend for your peer’s website and justify reasons for those changes.
Citing the text for specific supportive evidence, name one positive aspect and one negative aspect that influenced your adolescent development.

I reviewed a colleague’s blog post in class. The blog was very well structured. I had a few suggestions to make this excellent blog even better and more appealing to employers. One thing the blog post did not have was a contact page, although there was a resume. I would add the contact page just to give employers more information about the person. The contact page can include additional emails or social media links. Another suggestion is to add a photo so employers can see what you look like. I would also add a page with experience or special projects that the person has done in their professional career.

One positive aspect of my adolescence would be my relationship with my step-mother. The text explains how adolescence is often a time when children and parents do not see eye to eye. But my relationship with my step-mother helped me through the difficult adolescent  times and experiences.  She served as an outlet for me to express how I feel and talk about anything, anytime. My own mother was not as understanding. One negative aspect that influenced my development were my peers and environment. In the town where I grew up there was not much for teens or kids to do. So trouble was always in the forecast. To be accepted, sometimes I had to pretend to be a person that I was not to be liked and feel accepted.

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